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Immortal
Time, it chases,
Time, erases
It feels no elation,
Takes no vacation
It is supreme...
It devours everything
Time can mend you,
Time can break you
It does just what...
It wants to!
Time's the enemy,
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me...
Time's the enemy,
But what it doesn't see...
Is that it can't take my words...
They are immortal...
Time, it molds you,
Into something you are sure,
You would not choose
And you can't fight it,
You can only ride it,
Because if you fight time...
You always lose
You stare it in the teeth,
Everyday!
But time doesn't go away!
Because time's the enemy,
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me...
Time's the enemy,
But what it doesn't see...
Is that it can't take my words...
They are immortal...
Burning forver!
Never severed!
From just who I am...
Time's the enemy,
But time's afraid of me
Time knows just what I seek...
Because time's the enemy!
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me!
Time's the enemy!
But what it doesn't see!
Is that it can't take my words,
They are immortal!
They will live on,
As the seasons turn...
As the whole world burns...
Because I am immortal!
jlp January 4, 2009-Revised February 20, 2009
Time, it chases,
Time, erases
It feels no elation,
Takes no vacation
It is supreme...
It devours everything
Time can mend you,
Time can break you
It does just what...
It wants to!
Time's the enemy,
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me...
Time's the enemy,
But what it doesn't see...
Is that it can't take my words...
They are immortal...
Time, it molds you,
Into something you are sure,
You would not choose
And you can't fight it,
You can only ride it,
Because if you fight time...
You always lose
You stare it in the teeth,
Everyday!
But time doesn't go away!
Because time's the enemy,
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me...
Time's the enemy,
But what it doesn't see...
Is that it can't take my words...
They are immortal...
Burning forver!
Never severed!
From just who I am...
Time's the enemy,
But time's afraid of me
Time knows just what I seek...
Because time's the enemy!
It is not friendly
Time wants to take,
Everything from me!
Time's the enemy!
But what it doesn't see!
Is that it can't take my words,
They are immortal!
They will live on,
As the seasons turn...
As the whole world burns...
Because I am immortal!
jlp January 4, 2009-Revised February 20, 2009
Literature
Asylum's Rant
Within these corridors,
she is Queen
and when she speaks
her voice shakes sleep
out from under
the quivering shell
of spine's own feet
and it's documented
-somewhere-
how they've seen her
in teetering dance
with those antiquated demons
of 'froth' and 'lurk'
Me; I only watch her,
those high heels clicking,
rounding corners,
checkmarking tiny boxes
with that fancy white pen of hers
--her wrists and fingers
adorned in silvery sevens,
crystal-like glasses
perched
in low singsong
upon her nose
and that high strut
of the
Literature
Emotionless
I only show you the outside,
on the inside. I'm broken.
I keep all my emotions bottled away,
you think I can't express them.
but I do. I want you to see that.
These are my emotions,
scared, hurt, angry, sad, happy.
Plenty more, but you can't see that.
You wanted my life,
my emotionless state, it's a curse.
I can't bear to show you my emotions,
my sorrows, my pain.
Always know just because you don't see the inside,
doesn't mean it's not there.
Literature
Reminiscence
I can
feel her
presence
in the
way the
wind blows.
-Brian Shuffett
May 8th, 2010
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The theme is "immortal" suggested by !windchime25.
when I finally got her to decide on the prompt she wanted(), I looked at it, and it said a lot to me, but I thought "Why do what's expected, I don't like to conform!"
So rather than go bother the vampires and their undead cousins(), and rather than cry about how I don't want to die, I went somewhere else.
Because of my words, I AM immortal, and time can just shove that right up it's ass.
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Words make us Immortal. This is very pretty, and I like the visuals it brings to mind.