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She has a smile,
That is so amazing
And when she looks at you,
It will drive you crazy
Tantalizing glimpses,
Of teeth between skin
There is nothing you can do,
Her smile just sucks you in!
It's a smile that's flirty,
And outrageous
And I can stare at her,
For what feels like ages!
When she smiles...
Silence falls over the room!
When she smiles...
Everyone wants to be,
Within her view!
When she smiles...
She is smiling at you...
She has a classic beauty,
Like you wouldn't believe
And one of those faces,
That you simply must see
Her eyes are so lovely,
It's like they're glowing
And looking into them,
Is just like a dream!
As her gaze passes over,
Everyone thinks
"Please just this one time,
Let it be me!"
Because when she smiles...
People forget where they are!
And when she smiles...
Everyone smiles back,
They can't frown anymore!
When she smiles...
She is smiling at you...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster!
When she smiles, your heart beats FASTER!!
She has a smile,
That is so contagious
And even though I've seen it,
I don't know what to make of it
It's a special smile,
That brings you to your knees
When she locks her eyes on you,
There is no release!!
Because when she smiles...
She is smiling at you!
And when she smiles...
You don't quite know,
Just what to do!
When she smiles...
No, nothing else matters!
Because when she smiles...
Your heart beats faster!
jlp July 25, 2008-Revised May 7 2009
That is so amazing
And when she looks at you,
It will drive you crazy
Tantalizing glimpses,
Of teeth between skin
There is nothing you can do,
Her smile just sucks you in!
It's a smile that's flirty,
And outrageous
And I can stare at her,
For what feels like ages!
When she smiles...
Silence falls over the room!
When she smiles...
Everyone wants to be,
Within her view!
When she smiles...
She is smiling at you...
She has a classic beauty,
Like you wouldn't believe
And one of those faces,
That you simply must see
Her eyes are so lovely,
It's like they're glowing
And looking into them,
Is just like a dream!
As her gaze passes over,
Everyone thinks
"Please just this one time,
Let it be me!"
Because when she smiles...
People forget where they are!
And when she smiles...
Everyone smiles back,
They can't frown anymore!
When she smiles...
She is smiling at you...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster...
When she smiles, your heart beats faster!
When she smiles, your heart beats FASTER!!
She has a smile,
That is so contagious
And even though I've seen it,
I don't know what to make of it
It's a special smile,
That brings you to your knees
When she locks her eyes on you,
There is no release!!
Because when she smiles...
She is smiling at you!
And when she smiles...
You don't quite know,
Just what to do!
When she smiles...
No, nothing else matters!
Because when she smiles...
Your heart beats faster!
jlp July 25, 2008-Revised May 7 2009
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And it just wont go away
When the rain falls to the beat of the drum
I know you'll make it all okay
When I'm drowning in a flood of emotion
And the tears wont stop raining from my eyes
When I'm falling deeper into this ocean
I know you wont let me die
I trust you to save me
For you were once drowning too
In this vast and wide sea
I know there's only one for me...you
The sight of your smile
It makes the storm go away
You make the sunshine stay for awhile
So why don't you stay?
The sound of your voice
It calls me back from the depth of this ocean
Even though you saved me by choice
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photographs of us.
one.
the first thing i noticed about you was your smile. it pulled me in, and i was a fool for not resisting.
i guess you could say i loved your smile more than i loved you.
two.
we watched a thunderstorm from your porch, leaves and rain falling down, wind howling, thunder roaring.
you said the flashes of lightning were beautiful, and you watched them with your eyes closed.
but i couldn't bring myself to close my eyes, not even for a second.
i was too busy staring at you.
three.
we were standing on a bridge, watching the water run run run beneath us. fireflies danced in the air, playing a game of tag that i could only watch; never jo
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Loving you is harder than you can imagine.
Imagining though, is harder than loving you.
Distance makes love stronger, so they say.
They say it increases strength, but so does it pain.
Every night I lay awake close to tears.
Close to tears I lay in wait for your arms to embrace me.
Arms that will not embrace me for an unknown amount of time.
Every muscle screams when I move, calling out for you.
I call out for you in dreams. I scream. But you cannot kiss me calm.
I wake up with nightmares of you gone forever.
The nightmare feels like reality, not having you here.
Every hug from friends feels too short.
The feelings are too short, k
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The response to the original version of this [link] was so AMAZING, that I posted a poll asking if anyone would like to see alternate lyrics. The response was, in a word, YES.
So here it is.
Both this, and the original were written for because she asked me to, and she has one of the most amazing smiles I have ever seen.
Enjoy!
*Changed the second verse around.
So here it is.
Both this, and the original were written for because she asked me to, and she has one of the most amazing smiles I have ever seen.
Enjoy!
*Changed the second verse around.
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After 1 year... This is still my favorite poem. <3