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When She Smiles

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Her lips are luscious,
And so appealing
And when she smiles at you,
Her eyes are so revealing
It's a little smile,
Of flirtatious disaster
The way she looks at you,
It makes your heart beat faster
When she turns away,
You go running after her
Everything's forgotten,
It doesn't matter!

When she smiles...
Everyone in the room,
Just stops where they are!
When she smiles...
The whole world is stage,
And she is the star!
When she smiles...
She's smiling at you...

Her beauty glows within,
Just like her own candle
Man I bet you anything,
She'd be too hot to handle
Radiance slips out,
Of her every pore
But she turns away,
Just when you're wanting more
You race to catch up,
Before she gets to the door
But then she turns that smile on you,
Just like she did before!

When she smiles...
Every man forgets where he is
When she smiles...
Every man thinks "It doesn't get better than this"
Because when she smiles...
She's smiling for you...

It's no illusion,
So let there be no confusion
She is who she seems to be...
With a smile that is wide,
And so inviting
You can't escape from it,
There is no use in hiding!

When she smiles...
Everyone stops where they are!
And when she smiles...
You'd like to chase after her,
No matter how far!
When she smiles...
She's smiling at YOU!

jlp July 25, 2008-Revised November 8, 2009
A request from :iconkiss-me-on-the-hand: .
She wanted me to write a song for her about smiles and beauty. :)
And here it is!
I know Missy, I said it would take a couple of days.
I was off by, oh, a couple of days. :XD:

Hope you like it! :) :hug:

To all my readers, go visit her! She has a wonderful smile, guaranteed to brighten up ANYONE'S day! :)

*EDIT* There are alternate lyrics to this song!:D [link]

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:

*Posted to RedBubble on January 28, 2012 [link]
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greydeadrain's avatar
sounds like she has a buetiful smile and any girl who wouldent like a poem like that written about them must be crazy