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Raw
You cut me open,
You...make me bleed...
All my wounds are open,
Raw and seeping...
Your devilish desires!
Set me on fire!
But now I seem to be!
The one thing you don't require!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I have become addicted,
To the pain that is you...
And even though I need you to be gone,
It scares me to lose...
Your evil eyes!
Cut me like knives!
Slowly taking away!
All of my life!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I am walking away...
For once!
For a change...!
With every step that I take...
I finally!
Feel safe!
Safe from you...!
Now, I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
jlp April 28, 2009
You cut me open,
You...make me bleed...
All my wounds are open,
Raw and seeping...
Your devilish desires!
Set me on fire!
But now I seem to be!
The one thing you don't require!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I have become addicted,
To the pain that is you...
And even though I need you to be gone,
It scares me to lose...
Your evil eyes!
Cut me like knives!
Slowly taking away!
All of my life!
I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
I am walking away...
For once!
For a change...!
With every step that I take...
I finally!
Feel safe!
Safe from you...!
Now, I am raw!
And I am torn
Everything about me,
Has been worn...
Away!
From you!
You stand there,
And smile at me,
And every little smile,
Makes me bleed!
A little more...
I don't know what I saw,
In you!
The one who has made me raw...
(You seep from my wounds,
As I walk away...)
jlp April 28, 2009
Literature
raw
take back
your pretty love
words
tuck them
under your
tongue
kiss me
until my lips bloom
with bruises
scrape me raw
with your
blistering skin
and scratch
this itch until
it bleeds
Literature
love
my joy in you
was short lived
my sorrow
everlasting
Literature
nineninenine.
I.
We ought to call you an ambulance,
my dear; it's my
heart that needs the operation,
but your personality has been amputated
without anaesthetic.
Do you remember the
days where we stood
still and counted the
stars as they shone
redyellowbluewhite?
Those days are gone now,
and we never finished counting
those combusting balls of fire.
I... I...
You're a cancerous tissue,
weaving your way into
lifedeath and hopefear.
Yes, you certainly left your mark.
You ate my heart from the
inside
out.
I always said you belonged to
the sky.
Those disappeared days,
I pointed out our home
in the universe, and I like
to think that's
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For a time after heartbreak, the wounds are open, wide, they are raw.
Picking at the wounds only makes them worse. Walk away. Let them heal.
Picking at the wounds only makes them worse. Walk away. Let them heal.
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you had me at seeping