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Pitiful
You can see it...
In my eyes...
It's hatred...
Undisguised!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
It simmers...
It burns within...
Makes me reckless....
And it makes me grim!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
Instead of what you do!
So now!
(Now!)
(Now!)
I'm about to give in...
To my pain!
(My pain...!)
You will beg me for forgiveness,
But I will not refrain!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do!
I will make you beg!
I will make you plead!
You will get down,
On your sorry knees,
And beg to be let loose...
But I won't let you go so soon...
This is the price that you pay,
For what you choose...
I despise you...
I don't care...
About you at all...
I only want to watch you fall!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
This is the price you pay,
For all your crimes!
The price you pay,
For all the times!
You ignored...
Everyone...
Because you're so...
Pitiful
jlp December 8, 2008-Rewritten March 16, 2010
You can see it...
In my eyes...
It's hatred...
Undisguised!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
It simmers...
It burns within...
Makes me reckless....
And it makes me grim!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
Instead of what you do!
So now!
(Now!)
(Now!)
I'm about to give in...
To my pain!
(My pain...!)
You will beg me for forgiveness,
But I will not refrain!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do!
I will make you beg!
I will make you plead!
You will get down,
On your sorry knees,
And beg to be let loose...
But I won't let you go so soon...
This is the price that you pay,
For what you choose...
I despise you...
I don't care...
About you at all...
I only want to watch you fall!
If you could feel,
Just what I feel!
I think you'd be,
This way still!
Thinking about what you want,
Instead of what you do...
This is the price you pay,
For all your crimes!
The price you pay,
For all the times!
You ignored...
Everyone...
Because you're so...
Pitiful
jlp December 8, 2008-Rewritten March 16, 2010
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Bewilderment
All I ever wanted was to feel you inside of me
In the nooks and crannies of my mind,
The voided blackness of my heart.
But I'm left with a vague sense of bewilderment.
Literature
Dysfunctional
I need to know that I can breathe,
That I can not be surrounded by your presence
And still be okay in the end.
I need to walk away from this dyfunctional relationship
But I get lost in endless circles that always leads back to you.
We're too indifferent to survive another day
That is full of nothing but dysfunctionality and guessing games.
And it scares me to be away from you but losing myself along
The way of this love journey scares me even more.
I got lost and entangled with your heart as we blended and got blinded
By a four lettered word that shouldn't have been.
Don't leave me hanging here because I'm starting to drown now.
Literature
Unsent
Dear,
I'm too afraid to say your name,
I think you'd think I was weird if you realized
That guy that barely knows you
And that you've only talked to once or twice,
Is writing about you right now.
If all goes steady,
Then you had better get used to it.
Dear,
It's slowly progressing in little steps
But I know soon enough it'll fade for awhile,
It still feels so distant,
And the tension is building.
That is,
I'm building up hope
And tension is beginning to stress
My heartstrings.
Note to Self:
I've found that maybe my worst enemy
Is my reaction to what one person says
Rather than falling back upon
What several other people s
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Do people really change?
Some don't, and they are the pitiful ones.
Being faced with reality, and refusing to admit it, ignoring it, is just about the worst thing you can do.
People have died, and governments have fallen for less.
Open your eyes.
Break. The. System.
**3-16-10-This song has been heavily revised, there were a lot of places where I used parenthesis to denote echoing words, but I've removed almost all of them, this has helped to make this piece shorter, and to also bring it together in a more fluid way.
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Some don't, and they are the pitiful ones.
Being faced with reality, and refusing to admit it, ignoring it, is just about the worst thing you can do.
People have died, and governments have fallen for less.
Open your eyes.
Break. The. System.
**3-16-10-This song has been heavily revised, there were a lot of places where I used parenthesis to denote echoing words, but I've removed almost all of them, this has helped to make this piece shorter, and to also bring it together in a more fluid way.
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