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Left here, forgotten
By myself, on my own,
I am lost in the silence,
Of my wounded soul...

I don't know...
How this came to be,
I am alone on the darkness!
It is my reality!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown
I'm fading...
Becoming...
Less than me...

Lying, in a room
With four stark walls
And I would hit the floor,
But there is nowhere for me to fall

One door, it taunts me,
I know there is no escape
Surrender, the only option,
The one I refuse to take!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown
I'm fading...
Becoming...
Less than me...

A shadow...
Of who I once was..
Like my body...
Memories have turned to dust...

Wounded...painfully...
A voice raised...in silent screaming...
And each wound makes me...
Less than me!

The beating of my heart,
Is the only sound
You can't leave me here alone,
Because, I know I will drown!
I'm fading!
Becoming!
Less than me!
But you are never with me...
And that's why you don't see...

jlp February 5, 2009
Locking your child away, with no possessions, no human contact, no bed, without anything, rather than trying to understand them, to help them, is a crime.

You hear some disturbing things when yours is the only voice.

Trust me. I know.

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
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:icongolden-leaves:
Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds like an Evanescence song... which makes it wonderful, because I love her very much.
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
I get that a lot. :B Im not sure WHY though.
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just know you're poetry is beautiful and VERY emotive. :)
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Thank you love. :)
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RunningBear5858 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very haunting, but still gorgeous. :heart:
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Brony2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is the way I truly felt when I 1st came here to DA
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Brony2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
but now i only feel like this some of the time
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Brony2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thx
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Myredemption023 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
Could relate alot o.O nice job :D
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:iconthesekrimzonflames:
TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
Thank you. :hug: :)
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Myredemption023 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010
:P
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Permanent-Insanity Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
tragically beautiful :heart:
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:iconthesekrimzonflames:
TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
Thank you. :heart:
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Permanent-Insanity Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
No problem :heart::hug:
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:iconr-e-g-g-i-e:
R-e-g-g-i-e Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its so beautiful..
I think no one wants to be this, very alone..
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009
yeah. :(
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Aedammair-Feline Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
Sad :(
But well written.
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
yeah...:( :hug:
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brassteeth Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
Thanks for writing this, very brave.
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009
:)
Thank you. :hug: :heart:
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d00dbiteme Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
:hug: :[
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HugQueen Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009   Writer
I don't know...
How this came to be,
I am alone on the darkness!
It is my reality!


:iconteamoplz:
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HugQueen Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009   Writer
:smooch:
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HugQueen Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009   Writer
:iconsmoochesplz:
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HugQueen Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009   Writer
:giggle:
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prb139 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
wow...that one really hit a spot i havent thought about in a looong time...the song, your comments everything just fits...thanks for sharing it with us and articulating something i know i couldnt'...:love:
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
Thank you. :) :manhug:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Professional Writer
Wow this song touches apart of me, a door that I have sealed shut inside of me. I can really relate to it on a deep level. :rose:
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
That makes me sad. :(
:hug: :heart:
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DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Professional Writer
Oh don't be sad, through my writing I am trying to write my way through it, maybe one day I will post some of it here on DA :hug:
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Life-0r-Death Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
The only voice being heard is my own. I know how that feels too. I know. ^_^
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Life-0r-Death Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
..Thanks.. :)
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Very true, you do hear some pretty disturbing shit when your voice is the only voice you hear. You have created some very vivid images with this one. Of course one can imagine with such a voice and a strength moving the words. =) :heart:
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbigheartplz:
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlovepurpleplz: loves :iconloveredplz: hehe.
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underworldriver Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i knew you would like that
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nightfall8705 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
I love this song. :love:
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
:)
Thank you Angel. :hug: :heart:
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