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Fire of Day

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  Fire of Day

Some days you feel it...
Again
That mystery...
That washes you down...
And makes you drown...
You do just what,
You think is right
Even as cause and effect,
Ruin and rule your life

(But I don't have the answer,
For the riddle that you pursue
Staring at, the fire of day,
While everyone is haunting...
You...)

Hammering on you,
With the fire of day
Listen to your cries,
Listen to your sighs
You are lost...
Oh you are lost...

Some days you feel it...
Again
Words used as weapons,
Truth overcome by lies
As it washes you down,
You realize...
Cause and effect,
Ruin and rule...
Because of what you do...

(Cause you don't have the answer
To the riddle that you pursue
Staring at, the fire of day,
While everyone is haunting...
You)

Hammering on you,
With the fire of day
Voices in your mind,
Never go away
Listen to your cries,
Listen to your sighs
You are lost...
Oh you are lost...
As your ashes fall...
Let them fall...
In the fire of day...

jlp December 10, 2008
Once again, I have been granted the opportunity to work with a fellow deviant. "Fire of Day" is based on a piece of the same name by ~Emocienne

I truly enjoy doing this, enhancing someone's work, while always staying true to the original meaning. I take pride in bringing their words to life, in breathing fire into what they have done.

"Fire of Day" [link]
Some days you feel it again
that mystery that washes you down
And what do you think is right
for cause and effect rule your life

But I don't have the answer
for the riddle that you pursue
And what do you think you'll do
Everyone else is haunting you

Hammering on you with the fire of day
Listen to your cries
Listen to your cries
Oh you are lost
Oh you are lost

Some days you feel it again
but you don't have the answer
That mystery that washes you down
for the riddles that you pursue

With the fire of day
With the fire of day
Let your ashes fall
Let your ashes...
Let your ashes fall

~Emocienne I hope you like what I did with your work. :heart:
And I hope everyone enjoys her effort, and mine as well. :nod:
As always, be sure to show her the same love you show me, because without her work, my version would not exist. :)

"Fire of Day" , original, is owned by ~Emocienne
"Fire of Day", new version, is owned by =th3krimzon1
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sykoalice666's avatar
yes sometime i wish those voices would just vanish but they are in fact what keep me sane...lol hey maybe i should use that in a poem...hmmm
nice work.would u be interested in doing this to one of my horrible poems?