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Dancing in the Chaos

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Dancing in the Chaos

A heart-stopping beat,
Bursts into life,
And tries to claim me
I wish it would be,
Never-ending
On the confusion...
And music I thrive
It does it to me,
Every time!

I feel safest!
While I'm dancing in the Chaos,
With the world swirling,
Around me!
Smashing and crashing,
Bursting into flames!
And when it's over...
I will never be the same...

Destruction and pain,
Are all that I feel
It's like I'm looking at myself,
From above,
It's so surreal...
When it's over, I feel,
Empty and alone
Why did it go away,
And leave me on my own?

I feel safest!
While I'm dancing in the Chaos,
With the world swirling,
Around me!
Smashing and crashing,
Bursting into flames!
When it's over...
I will never be the same...

If you don't know what I mean,
Then the Chaos is something,
That you have never seen!
I don't know what I'd do...
Without the Chaos, coursing through!

I am safest!
When dancing in the Chaos!
With the world swirling...
Around me!
Smashing, crashing, bursting into flames!
Come dance with me...
And you will never be the same!

jlp August 14, 2008-Revised August 12, 2009
This piece is based on "Chaos" [link] by ~N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS

I feel safest
while I'm dancing In the Chaos
with the world
swirling
around me
smashing and
crashing and
bursting into
flames and
destruction and
pain and
when it all stops
I feel so alone
so empty
and I don't know what to do
without the Chaos

So much fun!!!( To write,lolz)
When I first read her piece, I thought, "This is WAITING to be a song!"
And now it is.
I want to stress that this piece would not be possible if it wasn't for her, so please show her the same respect that you show me. :)
The great thing about writing is this:
Eventually, you run out of words to describe how a picture makes you feel, but you never run out of words to describe how WORDS make you feel!:D

"Chaos", copyright ~N0-R3AL-PR0BL3MS
"Dancing in the Chaos", copyright =th3krimzon1
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Dendatzi's avatar
wow. just wow.