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Between Dreams

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Words are my passion,
The blood that flows,
In my veins
And every time,
That they slip out,
The page gets so stained

In my dreams,
I see so many things,
That with time just fade away
But between those dreams,
I see so many things,
Things that remain

My words...
Are my dreams...
Sometimes...
I get caught in between...

Between...dreams...
I see who I am,
And who I used to be
Between...dreams...
My love is on fire,
An unchained desire
Between...dreams...
I am hovering, flying...
Floating away...

In the silence of my dreams,
I can hear ice melting,
As it slowly fades
And even though the silence abounds,
The ice resounds,
Each drip, one of my days

In my dreams,
There are magical things,
Things I never thought I would see
But between those dreams,
Oh how I can feel,
The magic as it's fading

My words...
Are my dreams...
Sometimes...
I get caught in between...

Between...dreams...
I see who I am,
And who I used to be
Between...dreams...
My love is on fire,
An unchained desire
Between...dreams...
I am hovering, flying...
Floating away...

It's funny...sometimes...
The things you see,
When you're alone,
The silence of your mind,
Has become your home,
And anywhere...
Is where you...can go...

Ice is still melting,
Like me it's fading...

Away...!

Between...dreams...
I see who I am,
And who I used to be
Between...dreams...
My love is on fire,
An unchained desire
Between...dreams...
I am hovering, flying...
Floating away...

My words...
Are my dreams...
Sometimes...
I get caught in between...

Between dreams...

jlp November 22, 2009
First, let me say that this piece has a great deal of meaning to me. :nod: I was honored with another chance to work with the art of a deviant whose work I adore, =Flermigan

This piece is based on the ideas from not one, but two pieces of hers, "Between Dreams" [link] and "With Passion" [link] , as well as having my own thoughts incorporated into and around what she created, resulting in something that I feel does justice to both of us. :)

It is also, at long last, my first piece that would be called "surreal", which =CartheInsane has been after me to write for over a year now. :D

Funny how things work out, isn't it? :)

Barbara, thank you so much for letting me take my ideas and add them to yours, it means more to me than I can tell you. :) :heart:

What do YOU see, between your dreams? :heart:

Enjoy. :)

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
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