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A Little More
When the wind whispers my name,
Tell me how does it sound to you?
Does it remind you of pain,
Of all the times you've been lied to?
I'll tell you what it means to me!
I'll tell you what I think see!
Just before I walk right out the door!
This is my love eternally!
Tell me why can't you believe?
I...need you!
Just a little bit more!
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
Before I'm...out the door...!
I want to say...
I need you!
Just a little bit more...
Do I remind you of someone,
In the past you have longed for?
Does this mean that you don't,
Want me here with you anymore?
I'll tell you what it means to me!
You are all that I see!
Please tell me why you can't believe?
Why can't you ease my suffering?
Tell me why can't you see,
That I... need... you!
Just a little bit more?
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
I need to love you,
You are the one I was born for!
I...need...you!
Just a little bit more...
A little more...
My hand over my heart for you
A little more...
If the world was mine, I'd give it to you
A little more...
There is nothing, that I!
Would!
Not do!
Because I...need...you!
Just a little bit more!
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
Just, just a little bit more!
I want to love you,
Just a little bit more
I want to always think of you,
Just a little bit more
This is my love for you,
Just a little bit more
Just, just a little bit...
MORE!
jlp Sept. 1997-Revised June 2, 2009
When the wind whispers my name,
Tell me how does it sound to you?
Does it remind you of pain,
Of all the times you've been lied to?
I'll tell you what it means to me!
I'll tell you what I think see!
Just before I walk right out the door!
This is my love eternally!
Tell me why can't you believe?
I...need you!
Just a little bit more!
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
Before I'm...out the door...!
I want to say...
I need you!
Just a little bit more...
Do I remind you of someone,
In the past you have longed for?
Does this mean that you don't,
Want me here with you anymore?
I'll tell you what it means to me!
You are all that I see!
Please tell me why you can't believe?
Why can't you ease my suffering?
Tell me why can't you see,
That I... need... you!
Just a little bit more?
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
I need to love you,
You are the one I was born for!
I...need...you!
Just a little bit more...
A little more...
My hand over my heart for you
A little more...
If the world was mine, I'd give it to you
A little more...
There is nothing, that I!
Would!
Not do!
Because I...need...you!
Just a little bit more!
Just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
Just, just a little bit more!
I want to love you,
Just a little bit more
I want to always think of you,
Just a little bit more
This is my love for you,
Just a little bit more
Just, just a little bit...
MORE!
jlp Sept. 1997-Revised June 2, 2009
Literature
Subtle little hatreds
I whispered in your ear
A subtle little curse
That you'd find the one whose dear
And run them off first
Your subtle little hatreds
That sing into my mind
Lovely beloveds
Ragged with time
Never speaking truths
You whispered I love you
I've seen through the ruse
You never knew what to do
I've tired of your failures
I've walked away from your pain
I'm beyond caring craters
Dealing with you in vain
No longer shall weakness fill my heart
No more shall I bring light
For all this was just a start
Of falling to the night
Literature
when i was little.
when i was little,
my dad use to get mad
at me when i would
take the white fluffyness
of the dandelions and
throw it around.
he said it just made more,
and they were weeds.
today i took a stick
and hit all the fluff off
so hopefully it would
make more and i would
have more dandelions
to make wishes on
because oh boy, i need
some wishes really bad
right now.
when i was little,
we were driving home
and traffic was stopped
and we couldnt get on
the bridge.
later on that night,
we found out it was because
a guy was trying to jump off.
i laughed and thought it was
funny and he was jumping as
a joke.
later on i realiz
Literature
When I Was Little
Just because I don't remember a whole lot doesn't mean it didn't happen.
I remember that you lied.
You said he didn't want us.
they didn't want us.
It isn't true. I don't know if you believe it, but
it isn't true.
She told me, you know. The one I can only dream is my mother.
Told me how I took care of my little sister, made sure
that she had food. I was almost four, at the oldest.
I stored food for years, even after I no longer needed to stock up
to make sure I
to make sure we had enough.
I don't remember all of it, but I remember that.
Remember you being asleep
or maybe you were passed out
in that big recliner, and she and I
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This song has been 11 years in the writing! I've always had trouble getting the words right, getting the rhythm right, but I think I FINALLY got it!
Enjoy!
Btw, it's about a break-up, but it's a very fast-paced song.
Enjoy!
Btw, it's about a break-up, but it's a very fast-paced song.
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I love the way you write about relationships (and I don't mean only romantic love, but every other kind of feeling that goes into relationships of any kind) -- you manage to capture the tension and silent wishes just perfectly!